AND EVEN MORE REVIEWS Gabrielle Lovisa Sabrina’s Story, “Only Cowards Say Sorry Over the Phone” Sabrina, First of all, I just wanted to say that you are an incredible writer. Your pieces are always some of my favorites to read and I always find myself feeling very moved after reading them. This story in particular was very powerful and moving. I love your attention to detail and how much thought you put into setting up the scene of your story. I also love the figurative language that you utilized throughout, making the story more intriguing and fun to read. In the beginning, I felt like the story flowed very nicely and incorporated a very indifferent tone, yet hit a breaking point at the line stating, “And then my phone rang.” From there on out, I noticed a huge shift in tone and could literally feel the tension rising. This turning point in your writing really took me by surprise and despite the anger and frustration that was vocalized, I really found myself engaging fully and l...
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