206 Poem Critiques

EVEN MORE REVIEWS Critique from McGwire for Angeles Angeles Poem 3                 I really enjoy this poem, the emotions in this poem are strong. I feel dropped in and immersed in the world, I feel everything that the individual in the poem. Despites the fact I have not experienced all the things that the individual, very good for fully immersing me in this poem. The last line is so powerful and so strong, it really hits hard a gut punch to our reality. I honestly feel so close to the speaker of this poem, as it makes, we feel so much for this character/individual. I just want to reach out and hug them and help them anyway I can. The phrase that really gets me into this poem is “The roosters squeal”, as I can hear it when I read it every time. Rachel Geist's critiques Poem 2 Stephanie – Hey Stephanie!   I have to start by saying that I really loved your poem, “Safe Place.” Maybe it’s because...